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come on,
    you gotta admit –
            if you’re gonna   get killed, then
              dyin on a motorcycle when you’re
              flying like hell is
              pretty
              cool

or gettin eaten by a grizzly bear … or
a lion

or a shark, like a great white mainly;
    any of the great beasts really




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4 thoughts on “sand

  1. clistro

    I love the thought you express here. It’s really a very serious thing, pondering how to die, and the simple, sort of crude voice you use makes it wonderfully honest and matter-of-fact. I think the last word, “really,” could go. It sounds too sing-song with “mainly” and it takes the emphasis off of the more powerful word, “beasts.”

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