worn down and heading home
heaven bade the frogs’ grassy
reeds gricked to the light amongst
heat, dry humid my mudded boots sweat
and orderly step impressions into
the wetlands
benzene and ozone and kerosene
the gases
are baking
the flies and
the insects, the
place where the
stagnant water dragonflies
land and walk and impress
you and I, the top of the soil
and the air
forthcoming a path pudge so barely
itself a mark at treeline, I swat
I step I sink I swat, and it’s shade
into me I thank the lord and breath
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THE IMAGERY IS SUPERB.
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Jingle
May 5, 2011 at 9:02 pm
Totally agree with Jingle. Magnificent work, just like any other poem that I have read on this blog. Thank you
bisheriger_philosof
May 5, 2011 at 9:02 pm