woman screamed
she screamed. she screamed
so loud: “aaahahaahaahahhahhahahhhhhhahhhaaaaaahhhhhhahhhhh”
I mean you can hear it, right, by all the letters that I put in the word
I mean you can hear those letters
can’t you, the letters represent her scream
.said “don’t use that glass that is on the counter
aaahahaahaahahhahhahahhhhhhahhhaaaaaahhhhhhahhhhh.
I drank my orange juice out of it this morning
I haven’t washed it
it’s been sitting on the counter all day
it is dirty”
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Really interesting…I liked your use of second person, it really enhanced the moment.
dennisfinocchiaro
December 17, 2009 at 3:58 pm
I like this very much. It’s not trying to be anything that it isn’t, and it plays on itself rather well.
Thank you for posting such a little treat.
mlkabik
July 25, 2010 at 2:46 pm
Sometimes I did that, too
Ahhhhhahhhhh!
Tes
April 16, 2011 at 3:55 pm