littledebbieoatmealcookie

the dorting

with 3 comments

a water bottle opened that night …
lots of chairs yet filled by patrons,
yet filled by whoms which need relievance of dorting
and reels and raking;

empty arena …
but by a few, a percentage – those that are early
for crisp January sales and for lowly summer concert series;

but the water bottle did rock the crowd that night,
each person sweated in their summer chair, unexpecting
from their truest soul but a treat …
early, warranted;

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Written by littledebbieoatmealcookie

May 23, 2009 at 2:45 pm

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  1. Me no comprehend. :(

    cannelle14

    July 4, 2009 at 7:24 am

  2. very nicely said…

    shraddha

    July 4, 2009 at 9:43 pm

  3. ★★★★★

    Kristin Brænne

    May 5, 2011 at 9:03 pm


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