ole nanny in “An Elevator Metaphor”
ole Nanny and everyone walked up to the elevator
…the elevator has glass doors
…glass doors are kool
a couple of things to keep in mind
…Nanny’s mind doesn’t process the way it used to
…Nanny’s mind doesn’t work the way it used to
the glass doors are
cool, as you can see
through them and see
the elevator car go up
and down w/ people; you
can know when the car is
arrived and when it isn’t you can know that too;
but ole Nanny is where I hope to be one day:
…senile and alive
so the elevator bell rang
and the glass shaft doors opened …
and I saw that the car isn’t arrived error O’ err,
and that the shaft is empty
downward
to
the fourth floor
where the car is arrived …
and remember that granny’s mind doesn’t work the way it used to.
Everyone saw Nanny’s step one,two and yet no one knew
that they were seeing it; everyone knew that the
elevator was in a terribly dangerous and liable glitch;
everyone realized Nanny was going to fall
she landed on top of the elevator car!
on the fourth floor the passengers didn’t hear the hit on the
roof, but felt the shaking of the car and Nanny lay on an
industrial component that is part of the pulleys and cables and
dark shaft dust; she’s not dead – this story is going to have a happy
beginning with Nanny and kool glass doors and an
ending with Nanny and recovery, support, and ascension.
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That is some serious literature
severnyproductions
June 11, 2009 at 12:30 pm
thanks for not giving a morbid ending, its a beautifully written piece.
mydomainpvt
June 13, 2009 at 2:37 pm