littledebbieoatmealcookie

meadow fresh full of children

with 4 comments

me and all these children
- we’re running around in freakin circles
- and the autumn air is correctly fresh

there is no game that we are playing
these freakin kids don’t realize that
we’re supposed to have a goal
- to have a challenge
- to have a standoff of some sort

they just run and laugh like freakin idiots
I get caught up in it
- the madness of it
- O’ my shoes get stupid grass stains

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Written by littledebbieoatmealcookie

February 25, 2009 at 2:23 am

4 Responses

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  1. YEAH!!! the glorious fun and rapture of running for the pure sake of running amock. Indulge always say I.

    My kids grew up on a little house where it was possible to run in a cicrle/square around the center. We did this often, complete with dogs and cat joining. I think it kept us all SANE.
    yep, do ‘kid’ often as an adult…life instead of existing…
    Howdy oatmeal cookie poet…

    47whitebuffalo

    July 24, 2009 at 5:54 am

  2. I liked it! I don’t know why, but it’s pretty entertaining and funny to think that we used to be like that.

    xxhawkeyexx

    July 24, 2009 at 8:43 pm

  3. its kindof provocative, truthful… a look at the way we really are… hey .. like it

    rae

    July 24, 2009 at 8:44 pm

  4. beautiful! i like that it’s like a list, stupid grown up things and really important stuff, like getting your shoes green and living

    nina

    July 24, 2009 at 8:44 pm


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