hot cobbler smarts
there’s much harassment left
over from the peach eating
sunday weekend
grandma cooked,
she put gravy on the peeled
and a glass of tea sweet like
the Southern air and wildlife,
I ate cobbler, drank the tea
.
everybody got along fine and took
quick moments home with cameras,
developed back then
.
yep, everybody got along
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i love the simplicity and imagery in this
jeniklas
June 2, 2009 at 7:28 am
no more green tears from the tree
my bike is thinking deep for me,
I just forget to make a pee
and all around is red – you see?
when finally I got a pen
to write this down in proper train
my moments crushed in the dark
and I donate a leg to shark
it’s sad, it’s sad, it’s allways sad
when eating grandma’s old salad
marius09
June 6, 2009 at 1:45 pm
I like cobbler – thanks for sharing
slgreatsuccess
July 29, 2009 at 7:03 pm
Liking your stuff more and more.
Jared
November 3, 2009 at 11:44 am
love the dreamy, timeless like rythm.
Steph
November 16, 2009 at 8:12 am