littledebbieoatmealcookie

bring shame upon

with 3 comments

poetry is a shame, its
only for the pretty

for has it Been, thoust, seen written a
poem
abouts the waste with the flies,
abouts the toes sunbeat in summer smushing
the fecal on your ocean beach sand,
boiling pew from a dog left an hour ago?

no. never something ugly as
such in poem

rathers:
a desert sand with flower blooming serenely and lovely out of place
a meadow of meadows
    of meadow and flowers,
    colors like gorgeous to the end of the horizon
a sweet heart she hearkens a lover’s






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Written by littledebbieoatmealcookie

June 30, 2009 at 7:40 pm

3 Responses

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  1. Intersting choice of words. Nice work

    severnyproductions

    July 3, 2009 at 9:38 am

  2. I am really enjoying your poetry, some fascinating imagery and use of language. Keep up the terrific work.

    hokusbloke

    July 5, 2009 at 2:58 pm

  3. Love the juxtoposition of common attracting and repelling visuals and concepts.

    An Imperfect Servant

    August 6, 2009 at 5:54 pm


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