littledebbieoatmealcookie

beautiful sunset stripper

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rheumatism a la concorde
  - jet no
  - document no
hey pitcher, throw the ball

steel stilts as per Dawn Janice
  - girlfriend no
  - acquaintance no
throw the ball, pitcher

juvenile terrace diner cafe
  - food no
  - drink no
drop the puck

a careening automobile
  - true no
  - me no
drop the god damned puck, ref

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Written by littledebbieoatmealcookie

August 18, 2009 at 9:27 am

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  1. all sorts of ages and types of people brought together by ’sports’–this is full of surprising angles and allusions –wonderfully crafted..satisfying for multiple reads.

    47whitebuffalo

    August 22, 2009 at 6:11 am


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