a drunkard’s nigh upon late
The prudent alternative to slamming glasses down
in a public brewhause would be to kindly speak to your neighbor
and, with an audible speak, say “Well surely my my that brew was so good” ,
for this is not a mad barren outpost among the thieves and scoundrels
where bloodied specters ransack ceremony.
The woodened tables at which we slobber have forthrightly hosted
the best of your despairs and our lies, and so why not yell as would a humble man
digesting his peas and burping quietly.
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I enjoyed this and the thieves and scoundrel reference was perfect, I am going to have a fun time looking through your other stuff but this grabbed my attention.
synrg
May 20, 2009 at 2:01 pm
brilliant language. start to finish its totally contained. practically makes me giddy. it’s a.m. early so, cheers for that.
Steph
August 8, 2009 at 12:54 pm
why not indeed? There is something about pubs/taverns and the like that conjurs thought of dark bad men quenching thier thrist with a carpe diem mindset…mm.
47whitebuffalo
August 21, 2009 at 8:32 pm
I really like your writing…
Evelyn
April 10, 2011 at 2:21 am
I have nothing to add. No poetic words of praise. No constructive critique. I know that once I finished reading your post, I read it, then read it again, and just once more before coming to the conclusion that I couldn’t leave the comment box blank. Your talent shines.
splashofexpression
April 16, 2011 at 3:49 pm
Well done.
rootgilmore
April 16, 2011 at 3:50 pm