littledebbieoatmealcookie

a drunkard’s nigh upon late

with 6 comments

The prudent alternative to slamming glasses down

in a public brewhause  would be to kindly speak to your neighbor

and, with an audible speak, say “Well surely my my that brew was so good” ,

  for this is not a mad barren outpost among the thieves and scoundrels

where bloodied specters ransack ceremony.

The woodened tables at which we slobber have forthrightly hosted

the best of your despairs and our lies, and so why not yell as would a humble man

digesting his peas and burping quietly.



………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Written by littledebbieoatmealcookie

February 25, 2009 at 2:09 am

6 Responses

Subscribe to comments with RSS.

  1. I enjoyed this and the thieves and scoundrel reference was perfect, I am going to have a fun time looking through your other stuff but this grabbed my attention.

    synrg

    May 20, 2009 at 2:01 pm

  2. brilliant language. start to finish its totally contained. practically makes me giddy. it’s a.m. early so, cheers for that.

    Steph

    August 8, 2009 at 12:54 pm

  3. why not indeed? There is something about pubs/taverns and the like that conjurs thought of dark bad men quenching thier thrist with a carpe diem mindset…mm.

    47whitebuffalo

    August 21, 2009 at 8:32 pm

  4. I really like your writing…

    Evelyn

    April 10, 2011 at 2:21 am

  5. I have nothing to add. No poetic words of praise. No constructive critique. I know that once I finished reading your post, I read it, then read it again, and just once more before coming to the conclusion that I couldn’t leave the comment box blank. Your talent shines.

    splashofexpression

    April 16, 2011 at 3:49 pm

  6. Well done.

    rootgilmore

    April 16, 2011 at 3:50 pm


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Follow

Get every new post delivered to your Inbox.

Join 155 other followers

%d bloggers like this: